This is my least successful photo, my light painting because I think I could have been more creative with the light shapes itself and the lines are not centered with the subject. I really like how the subject itself turned out, but I would like the color tone overall to be more cool and for the light to be more centered and even/satisfying to look at. I think the shadow on the wall of the subject and how his face looks so peaceful, but I could fix the blanket in the right corner and the red glare on the edge of the lights too. I think I should have spent more time centering the squiggle of lights to his knees and across the size of his lap more so it would be more pleasing to look at. It might have even been cool to put more squiggles above the subject as well. Overall, I generally like the background other than the lights and if I could fix the light painting, I believe the photo completely would be more successful.
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